Adultery Mom's Village Affair

[ray.rowdy]

Guys i have a doubt , should i change the way of calling Mom from lashmi to Amma ?

Because it feels more Realistic and more emotional to the story .

First of all, you are writing this story superbly. Have become a fan of your writing. Keep it up.

Now, with regards to your doubt, I would suggest for Amma, as the story has been narrated from her son's point of view. Obviously, whenever the son refers to his mom, he would say Amma unless very specific context. That is more realistic, emotional as well.

Please don't make this story a clumsy one. A story with a tight script is more charming than a clumsy one. For that purpose, if the story contains some less unnecessary sex scenes or events or characters - that's fine. What mattes most is that what impression it leaves behind on the readers.

I would like to ask you a question. Have you thought out the climax of this story pretty well? Do you have a clear idea about that? Would this story meet with the misfortune of remained incomplete like many other superb stories in this forum?

Hope you will complete the story beautifully with a logical ending with no loose ends. Eagerly waiting for the next chapter.