[DesertStorm]

Heygi,

Thanks for a wonderful experience of a story that left me going through all sort of emotions from each chapter to chapter... It's truly a great experience to read this story and engage during it's publishing... I am repeating my self when I say that your imagination and the way you construct scenarios and weave them in such a way is simply outstanding... Like i mentioned in previous comment the reveal from Jay witnessing Tharun and Nikitha couldn't have happened at a better time to lower her guard and go with the flow to have sex with Jay when Tharun is standing outside the door.. I mean you clearly wrote why Jay can't say no to her on the UK flight and you brought that when Nikitha asks Jay to not deny her wish to be intimate with Jay... Simply superb!!!


I have only couple of question (if you want to answer),
1. By asking for round 2, are you implying that Nikitha felt the same gratitude she felt for Jay earlier with Tharun and because it's their farewell thing and it's how she wanted to express her gratitude or did jay message her about Sharmi's wish that they wanted second baby that made Nikitha go for 2nd round?

2. Why do you do these endings Heygi like Rahul Anandhi Suriya and Vikram Mirna Bharat? I actually wrote this in one of my earlier comments that it gives raise to lot of ambiguity in the readers minds


On a whole I really appreciate your writing, commitment and engagement to/with the readers