Adultery A Husband and Wife’s Playful Texts Turn Into a Complicated Affair - NEW CHAPTER UPDAT
(Today, 01:31 AM)RCF Wrote: Thank you. That was only time I felt bad I read a story and Author wouldn't listen....

Personally messaged him several times not to write 3rd part, he wrote it and screwed it big time...at the end pathetically united them over pregnancy and never explained her feelings for Desai nor her behavior last night between three of them....Unlike HeyGI, Krish never talks....so we have to assume it was his plot all along so we have to live with it. 

I did my best to understand but there were too many conflicting emotions and scenes that after some point didn't gel well. Glad you liked my comments from that story

~ RCF

I read the story series over the past 2 weeks.. part 2 ending is highlight or peak for that story.. the way emotions flowed or how meera confessed why she did what she did and how Krish owned his as well as some of her mistakes and saying we are not measuring who did bigger mistakes etc..was heart touching..

However part 3 completely messed my mind esp Ashish episode and other things that kept happening .. I was reading it after completion and that too only author updates..I can't even imagine what you guys went through while reading while it is being posted
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After messing up my mind reading only author updates i tried reading comments and yours and few others like critics honest, vikadakavi, Last samurai etc., brought some peace.. as the original ending was deleted, couldn't read it except for some of the quotes in comments but some people mentioned it answered all the open questions which were not addressed in the subsequent ending.. Meera's character for me appeared messed up since krish has the accident..so not sure I will find answers but found peace with your comments on that story 
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