7 hours ago
(7 hours ago)DesertStorm Wrote: Your 4 poems are simply amazing my friend.. they actually brought a smile on my face when I was worried about the updates
Thanks Man!!! (I know you were replying to RCF but just thought I will reply to you)
Actually this story reminded me of this movie's plot
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Nalugu_Stambhalata_(film)
Close but not really...
Here Jay doesn't have anyone to move on to nor he has anyone like Kamala for Naresh to hang on to for future, same applies for Mithra...
Simple one liner for this story: Stick to your choices and own mistakes or Correct them and make things right....that's all there is to the story.
Only story here on this platform which came close to deviating me from my one belief I always have supported in all stories...Love should win at the end but here I am OK if couple stick to choices as well...masterful writing.
Real question is if they stick to their choices, can they overcome the guilt and build a future with love? Can Nikita forgive herself for destroying so many lives unknowingly?
~RCF


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