3 hours ago
Heygi,
How do you think of these scenarios man!!! I read and reread these chapters and simply can't get enough of them.. the way you initially portrayed Mithra and how you have justifications for her behavior of being distant is simply extraordinary.. even though it's fiction it feels real.. that is because of how you tie the open questions.. in the middle when you have described Tharun's rough sex with Nikitha (just before her visit to Jay:s village), i thought Tarun has some hidden/secret desire (not in a good way) that we are yet to uncover.. But now it appears no one is a bad character and have little bit of gray that makes them appear complete dark during certain occasions...
Well scripted!!!!
How do you think of these scenarios man!!! I read and reread these chapters and simply can't get enough of them.. the way you initially portrayed Mithra and how you have justifications for her behavior of being distant is simply extraordinary.. even though it's fiction it feels real.. that is because of how you tie the open questions.. in the middle when you have described Tharun's rough sex with Nikitha (just before her visit to Jay:s village), i thought Tarun has some hidden/secret desire (not in a good way) that we are yet to uncover.. But now it appears no one is a bad character and have little bit of gray that makes them appear complete dark during certain occasions...
Well scripted!!!!
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