17-07-2026, 05:20 AM
(16-07-2026, 02:10 AM)Rizzi1198 Wrote: Hey bro you are a potential writer and honest review dun to bilkul b maza nhi aya iss update mn .man apki sari stories like karta or coment b karta hun or sab se zayda yehi story muja pasand thi apki par last episode mn ek dam se sab kuch pata chal gya to wo exitement khatm ho gayi story ki abi sher ki dominance khatsm ho gya thora fast forward kar di ap na
Is episode ko thora edit karo to shayd maza aye fantasy ka liye hum atay stories pa
By the way you are too good
Their were lots of twist and turns which i had planned , but seeing response . i have stopped working here on this story .
Deepak Kapoor
Author on amazon
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Author on amazon
- An Innocent Beauty Series ( 5 Books )
https://xossipy.com/thread-71793.html -- अनीता सिंह-
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