12-07-2026, 12:12 PM
I think this plot really works because of how well you've paced the story. Interesting choice to describe the setting the way you did. Can tell you are putting a lot of work into this. Love the way you structured it with such a unique perspective & made it so interesting ! Eagerly awaiting the next update.

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