Adultery Supriya: Ek Jawan Biwi ki Kahani

[Redangela]

APni story apne hisaab se likho... Tum readers ko puch rahe ho ki aage kya karna/karwana hai... 

This is not the way to write a story. This story is yours, so write it the way you want it to be... Yes you can ask for reader feedback not directions... My Opinion...

 Yes i am asking a feedback but i am also open for any suggestions
  of course, it is totally up to me, whether I take that suggestion or go some better way  i see fit for my story 

And i don't believe i have offended any one if i have ask suggestion with some one 
In fact, it's quite opposite of that. I believe they are a good writer. That's why I have approached to them. And ask for their feedback