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Adultery మధుమిత :ఒక అందమైన అమ్మ కథ
(09-07-2026, 09:40 PM)gvsubu1995 Wrote: Pls give feed back.. So that can write more efficient

bro narration ayitey peak assalu ,chala bagundhi slow ga eroctic ga ,but chinna suggestion repeated words chala undhi adhi konchem edit ga check chesukondi ..
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RE: మధుమిత :ఒక అందమైన అమ్మ కథ - by Alonewolf1522 - 10-07-2026, 12:17 AM



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