07-07-2026, 02:48 AM
I have been on messageboards like erstwhile Hotboard among others and have been readinf erotica from prolofic writers but your story is one of the best I have ever read !!! Trust me, I speak from my heart . You have a sensational flair for writing outstanding erotica, like Rubysen and Rupanita from Literotica . You don't know how good you are ! Keep writing my friend, I am hooked like never before. These days real good erotica are a rarity !
A few suggestions - Make your heroine in the story now get a navel piercing , and when she wears saree, whenver that is, make it so low that until and unless she shaves her pubic region, she can't wear it that low. Make her blouses, now and when she goes back to her previous life, backless and very very skimpy.
Make her get multiple ear piercings too and maybe a rose tatto on her calf and upper back. Make her wear heels when she goes back to the high society she belonged earlier
In the next part, make her REALLY GO to a marriage party for a few days from her own maternal side, and make her screw everyone from the groom to the groom's father and brothers. During that time, make her wear beautiful ornate banarasi sarees , but she should wear them dangerously low and with backless blouses to titillate every male guests in the house . At that time make her wear payals and waist chain too. Her husband should be pained to see she enjoying the young groom and sucking off someone else
Keep writing my friend, you are one of the best in Xossipy at the moment !
A few suggestions - Make your heroine in the story now get a navel piercing , and when she wears saree, whenver that is, make it so low that until and unless she shaves her pubic region, she can't wear it that low. Make her blouses, now and when she goes back to her previous life, backless and very very skimpy.
Make her get multiple ear piercings too and maybe a rose tatto on her calf and upper back. Make her wear heels when she goes back to the high society she belonged earlier
In the next part, make her REALLY GO to a marriage party for a few days from her own maternal side, and make her screw everyone from the groom to the groom's father and brothers. During that time, make her wear beautiful ornate banarasi sarees , but she should wear them dangerously low and with backless blouses to titillate every male guests in the house . At that time make her wear payals and waist chain too. Her husband should be pained to see she enjoying the young groom and sucking off someone else
Keep writing my friend, you are one of the best in Xossipy at the moment !
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