05-07-2026, 11:18 PM
Actually I already told you previously this story is very good with positive ending not negative ending.
And postive ending is very apt but negative ending is not good in my point of view anyways it's your story your wish no worries
And I have one request why don't you write a story like """""son helps to neighbour to get his mom""""""""
I think you have that capability by seeing your story telling skill I think you will write very well of this theme
I am waiting for your next story with this theme
And postive ending is very apt but negative ending is not good in my point of view anyways it's your story your wish no worries
And I have one request why don't you write a story like """""son helps to neighbour to get his mom""""""""
I think you have that capability by seeing your story telling skill I think you will write very well of this theme
I am waiting for your next story with this theme



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