05-07-2026, 09:32 AM
(This post was last modified: 05-07-2026, 09:34 AM by Mahesh12345. Edited 3 times in total. Edited 3 times in total.)
(05-07-2026, 08:35 AM)Lousy1995 Wrote: Thanks
See writer I expect positive ending not only me most of the people expects postive ending because in your story you wrote very dark theme . So if you write positive ending then it will be balanced otherwise it won't correct that means in my point of view.
So max try to end with postive ending because you create a sympathy on husband and wife as well as son also because you said husband is very thin and he always do his duty only for his family that means here in this context you unknowingly create a sympathy on him
And nextly mother also same by writing bruises on her wrist and sometimes she said the world is not good at outside like this here also you unknowingly create sympathy on mom charcter also
Nextly son ultimate. Starting point to ending point he suffered by Rajesh behaviour. Actually it's not acceptable because if any person want to sex with lady then no issues do sex with her but the problem is Rajesh doing sex with her infront of her son and give him pain it's not correct it's wrong actually it's not wrong it's sin. Because son don't want to see his mother affair but Rajesh forced him to see.
Here it clearly shows Rajesh is psycho so tell me how can we want dark ending with this psycho behaviour. It's very favorable to Rajesh it's not correct
So give justice to son and mother as well as husband also
Ya someone will say it's a adultery site don't talk about justice bla bla bla. For those persons I want to say something to them actually it's a adultery site I also agree but we all are humans so
In my point of view if you write positive ending then it's good



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