Adultery A Husband and Wife’s Playful Texts Turn Into a Complicated Affair

[heygiwriter]

WAIT, WHAT DID I JUST READ?


When I was thinking it was impossible for Nikitha to go back towards Jay, especially after the way she and Tharun had been having intense sex in the bed, suddenly you brought in the mirror to show what she was doing? Like a relisation? I have never seen anything like that even in movies.

I was jerking off to the scene unfolding between Nikitha and Tharun. When he asked for a second round, I was seriously wondering if they would try a new position or something. Because just minutes back, she was responding to his request and wholeheartedly tried for him. But then came the surprise. Nikitha locked her gaze on the mirror. THE TRUTH OUT - UNEXPECTED and UNBELIEVALE YET IT WAS SO GOOD. 


But WAIT DEAR AUTHOR

Before this scene, I actually wanted to scold you for bringing in the Nikitha and Tharun sex scene at all. In the previous chapter, we were left on a massive cliffhanger about who had come to Jay’s house to save him! I knew it could be Nikitha, but I was hoping it would be someone else. If it was her, I thought it would feel fake. After treating him so coldly for a whole week, why would she suddenly support him? Maybe she would bring the loan closure papers to show the uncle, but the uncle had not come for that, he came there just to ridicule him, right? So revealing loan paper looks illogical. 

When such a serious incident was happening on Wednesday evening, the chapter ended abruptly on that cliffhanger. So I was furious when the next chapter went back to the Wednesday morning incident. Then you started explaining the mirror magic, and Tharun was spouting some nonsense that I mostly ignored because, the entire setup promises a upcoming hot sex scene, At least, I thought, I had a hot sex scene to enjoy.


But what i got after that was completely unexpected. Without any preaching, without anyone telling her anything, Nikitha learned her lesson through her own actions. She stood in Jay’s shoes for once.

Beautiful. Poetic.

Now that she has arrived at Jay’s place, the entire setup feels so authentic. She looks so much more beautiful as a character now.
Can’t wait to see what you have in store next!

Im Glad you Enjoyed it :)