02-07-2026, 08:19 AM
The plot really works because of how well you've paced the story. Interesting choice to describe the setting the way you did. Love the way you structured it with such a unique perspective & made it so interesting! Story is turning more interesting and characters more intriguing. Mr.Heygi is doing what he does best. Hooked! Eagerly awaiting the next update.


![[+]](https://xossipy.com/themes/sharepoint/collapse_collapsed.png)