Coerced Shadow: Entrapment of my mother

[ray.rowdy]

Rupakpolo, this story is going great. However, I have something else to say. The USP of your stories have been their plots and language. Your stories' plots have always been very tight and hardly had any loose ends. And you have continued the same tradition for this story too. But, the simple language in which you used to narrate them made the reading experience a little more fascinating. So the language had a great contribution to make them a great read. However, for the last 2-3 stories of yours, basically the English ones - as it has been ages since your last Bengali story came, the language has turned unnecessarily complex. Too much use of complex sentences - which, overall, has made the reading experience a little less free-flowing. Whereas, previously it was very smooth because of your simple language. In Bengali, it can be said - "ভাষা তার প্রাঞ্জলতা হারিয়েছে".

Well, this is my personal feedback. Whatever, you have written I could never do even 1% of it. I have always enjoyed your stories - since early days of your writing 15-16 years back. This story too. So I try to convey what I felt while reading your last 2-3 stories.

Now, eagerly waiting for the next episode as well.