Today, 12:58 AM
Oh wooww...the story is taking a wicked and dark direction riddled with danger to our protagonist.
Very detailed screenplay.I half expected one of the former train scene goondas to turn up in such public spaces and be genuinely surprised to find their most beloved conquest again. But you kept it around the familiar and dangerously freindly chemistry that's building with Ustad n Bheem.
Very detailed screenplay.I half expected one of the former train scene goondas to turn up in such public spaces and be genuinely surprised to find their most beloved conquest again. But you kept it around the familiar and dangerously freindly chemistry that's building with Ustad n Bheem.


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