Adultery அவள் இதயத்தின் மொழி
(6 hours ago)Shajith Wrote: Dear friend,
This is not really a review of the story; it is a suggestion based on your personal fantasy.
As readers, we are always free to discuss the writing style, character development, pacing, emotions, and plot. Those kinds of comments help both the author and fellow readers.
However, asking the author to reshape the story according to individual fantasies changes the very purpose of the narrative. The direction of the story and the journey of its characters belong entirely to the author.
Let's appreciate the story for what it is, and if we have criticism, let it be about the storytelling—not about turning the characters into our own imagination.

I am with him. If pavi had been with one man for her sexual needs what you say is acceptable. She is nothing less than slut/whore yearning for different cocks. Every time she sees raj and Prakash she gets wet. What more you expect from readers.
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