Adultery A Husband and Wife’s Playful Texts Turn Into a Complicated Affair

[RCF]

I consider it as challange, will there be ever love? after this?

When people feel bad for Jay, that is where i work as a writer who made my character gets empathy. 

and i don't know to write a story , with sex with fun, i cannot ignore emotions around it, and i had to honor the emotions, feelings aftermath. That would give readers a warning, again and again fantasy is work in reality it comes with heavy cost, take relationship serious.

I am not saying emotions shouldn't be involved, Actually I like stories which has deep meaning and not just sex but Nikita here is ready for sex with out clarity and resolving emotions for Jay. Its like impromptu decision to invest elsewhere when your own love doesn't value you..I feel like this trip should have been without Sharmi and natural progression to Tharun than Jay...you already put the catalyst of letter in place which should make Nikita get close to Tharun...what is the point of SHarmi messing again and again unless you really plan to push Nikita into Tharun's arms in this trip itself which seemed too rushed to me at this point esp when there is so much pain in every character.

I know its not real, its for fun and you are not mainstream writer and only write for us...thankful for that but sometimes even in these stories when situations deviate from reality it pulls us back from the immersive exp we have while reading the story...

Two liberties you have taken to take this story forward has me reeling inside, why? how? and ofcourse frustrating lol 

1. Jay never saying one word to Nikita about not writing that letter...who in his normal brains would do that? I mean infront of HR its ok but outside at home, when she is leaving? Common
2. Sharmi after knowing everything the backstory, why would she still give verbal confirmation on her and Jay's relationship, that's insane...she could simply say "not everything is what you think, I beg you to listen once to Jay"...he is waiting for you...isn't it natural thing to do? Why would she still give false info to Nikita, I mean how many mistakes she will make unknowingly? Its not about being realistic or unrealistic or story is just fantasy...some ways characters should never behave, or say something which doesn't have meaning or purpose. 

Anyways, I feel you made this too complicated and tough to untangle at the end. 

~RCF