[heygiwriter]

Don't start this exhibition office bullshit. Earlier it was Aaditya, now his brother. If you are so much interested in these kind of things, then re-start last story. Don't kill this one.

This part ruined last story. So don't bring other characters in same manner here.


And don't give that same pathetic excuse like he was testing them and bla bla......

You clearly mentioned it many time that you will not introduce new character in this story. It will be a 4 - 5 character story.


This is may genuine feedback. 


Rest is upto you.

I think you instantly commented as soon as you read that word. 

The character Dhruv ended in the same chapter, when my character Tharun said he dont need to do a business of that kind. 

Not necessary was his point.