♥️♥️⭐காத்தவராயன் மரணத்தில் மறையாதவன், அவள் அவன் மரணத்தையே வென்றவள்.❤️❤️⭐️
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Excellent continuation natural feel no force fitting scenes...but feels bit of synch scenes like siripika and priyanka facing same kind of scenes in a parallel world kind...

mixing of fantasy using his power was top notch thrilling kind of update and feel the characters... it means well connected now....

logical errors will be feel but its adjusted by the power of anti heroism.... so forget the logic and enjoyed the narration with visual scenes by ur writings

priyanka realising herself slow and steadily but in the end you put a twist like confusing one to be waiting for next update...

hope for priyanka update continuation with big updates...
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RE: ♥️♥️⭐காத்தவராயன் மரணத்தில் மறையாதவன், அவள் அவன் மரணத்தையே வென்றவள்.❤️❤️⭐️ - by Raju@Vijay - Yesterday, 12:22 PM



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