Adultery Noida wife's descent into Quicksand ( New Novel)

[dindigul]

i discovered your story 2 days back and went through all of it within 2 days.. really loved it.. here is my review of things i lkied about the story

1. Gradual buildup of Monica's descent into sexual debauchery.

it begins with accidental exhibitionism with maid's husband, the guard to accidental infidelity with the armyman at manali and eventually to forced humilitiaon in the train. all of these events gradually ignite latent desires within monica, as she seeks active sexual satisfaction at the hands of lakhan and with friends after the birthday party. This really adds to the realism and erotic nature of the story. Any real woman like Monica wont become a slut overnight.. her gradual descent into the world of cuckoldry is intoxicating to read..

2. Monica being turned on by Rakesh's humiliation.

Although u have not fully explored it yet. but i loved this aspect of Monica's psyche.. especially when she is excited after javed and rafiq rub semen over his face... and at the end of last update where his friends r calling him a cuck while his monica looks on.
Rakesh being physically weak and meek adds to this submissive & humiliation angle.

3. Your exceptional command over the language and the brilliant expression.

Despite having interesting ideas, many writers r not able to execute an erotica because they cannot express properly. U clearly are gifted. There is flow to your writing and the way you write scenes. it is difficult to for me to articulate but i hope you get my feelings.
The way you describe Monica's mental state in different scenes.. guilt, shame mixed with excitement and arousal in her taboo situations.. its just fantastic.
Monica's clothing has also been perfectly described.. u really paint a perfect picture of an urban upper class indian woman with naughty desires

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