15-06-2026, 01:38 PM
(12-06-2026, 03:05 PM)aravindkkumar08 Wrote: Hi writer sorry to tell you compare to your earlier story this story is seem flat. When the story revived thought scenes of love making scenes or story jst like your earlier stories. Why don't you try a new story. I am not a writer just wants to tell that. Don't mistake me
Thanks for your feedback


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