12-06-2026, 06:24 PM
Bhai Rajeev01987 aur sab doston ko Pranam,
Pehle to aapki story ko bahut bahut thanks bhai. Maine poori thread padhi hai (Page 18 tak aapka last update). Story bahut hi zabardast hai — slow seduction, Rajeev ki jealousy, Smita ki shareefiyat aur Suleman Sir ka dangerous charm... sab kuch ekdum perfect build-up ho raha hai. Aapne jo passion aur details likhe hain, uska koi muqabla nahi.
Bhai, aapka last proper update Page 18 par tha (jahan Bhola daru pe bata raha hai bike ride ke baare mein aur CCTV footage ka scene). Uske baad aap busy ho gaye lagte hain, updates nahi aaye.
Main aapse respectfully permission maang raha hoon ki main is story ko aapke style mein hi continue kar sakun. Main bilkul same feel rakhte hue likhunga — Rajeev ki inner conflict, detailed descriptions (Smita ki body, especially back & gaand), slow-burn seduction, Bhola spying, aur erotic tension. Kuch bhi jaldi-jaldi nahi badalunga.
Agar aap allow karte hain to main agle update mein Page 18 ke last scene se hi continue karunga. Aur har update ke end mein mention karunga ki yeh continuation hai aapki original story ka.
Agar aap khud continue karna chahte hain ya koi objection hai to please bata den. Main respect karunga.
Sab doston se bhi request hai — agar permission mil jaye to apna feedback zaroor dena ki kis direction mein story ko le jaun (zyada slow seduction, more spying, massage scenes, bike ride details, ya aur intense taraf?).
Pehle to aapki story ko bahut bahut thanks bhai. Maine poori thread padhi hai (Page 18 tak aapka last update). Story bahut hi zabardast hai — slow seduction, Rajeev ki jealousy, Smita ki shareefiyat aur Suleman Sir ka dangerous charm... sab kuch ekdum perfect build-up ho raha hai. Aapne jo passion aur details likhe hain, uska koi muqabla nahi.
Bhai, aapka last proper update Page 18 par tha (jahan Bhola daru pe bata raha hai bike ride ke baare mein aur CCTV footage ka scene). Uske baad aap busy ho gaye lagte hain, updates nahi aaye.
Main aapse respectfully permission maang raha hoon ki main is story ko aapke style mein hi continue kar sakun. Main bilkul same feel rakhte hue likhunga — Rajeev ki inner conflict, detailed descriptions (Smita ki body, especially back & gaand), slow-burn seduction, Bhola spying, aur erotic tension. Kuch bhi jaldi-jaldi nahi badalunga.
Agar aap allow karte hain to main agle update mein Page 18 ke last scene se hi continue karunga. Aur har update ke end mein mention karunga ki yeh continuation hai aapki original story ka.
Agar aap khud continue karna chahte hain ya koi objection hai to please bata den. Main respect karunga.
Sab doston se bhi request hai — agar permission mil jaye to apna feedback zaroor dena ki kis direction mein story ko le jaun (zyada slow seduction, more spying, massage scenes, bike ride details, ya aur intense taraf?).
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