Adultery A Husband and Wife’s Playful Texts Turn Into a Complicated Affair
(11-06-2026, 06:55 PM)amzad2004 Wrote:
In my opinion you did fantastic job so far. But my hart got bleed when I read the 1st date chapter, I think unwillingly it showed a gold digger posture of Nikita. I have lost few galloon of blood, do not worry I visited hospital and refill from the blood bank. I understand this would necessary for the story's progression. I am very tense for upcoming chapters because you have a tradition to blunder a story at any stage. Also you have replied to a reader that every dynamics will change. It makes me to plan to book a bad in cardiac department at nearest hospital. I have already weaken eye sight.
Any normal person with a mature brain witho0ut hesitation is rooting to Jay and Nikita. Only those who are brainless immature people are rooting to Tharun and Nikita. I hope those sex retarded people will rotten in hell.
Pls heigi do not sent me to hospital.

Where is the gold digger part comes? I guess you have an issue with 'Overthinking'.. im not commenting personal. but you comments/ feedbacks are far extreme from story's context or intentions. 


Did any of the readers feel she is gold digger?  I bet no one will feel except you. 
Where and when did money came into part of story?  

Did you think Nikitha fall for costly dress. i mean the royal hotel , dress. 

Money has nothing to do with this.. 

Nikitha just wanted to feel loved, she wanted acknowledgement from loved one.. 

Jay seemed like never did that, but look at Tharun, he purchsed her a modern dress for special date.. 

[Im breaking this --> is a factor coming subtly in upcoming chapters..., (Nikitha would be happy if Jay even got her a simple saree, she just wanted something from loved one, not a costly dress, this is sort of simple things she expect) // may be i will change it bit as i have to open here..]

if the 'feeling loved, noticed' confused you for gold digging i'm sorry bro, you need to meet doctor for overthinking. Chill just a joke. 


There is Subtle Message kind of Metaphor, immediately.. 

Right in next scene, she was in same dress the modern and rich one, she would have looked odd at a small hotel, even the owner of shop doubtfully asked. 

But it didn't bother her, she blindly followed Jay and sat with him, eat Idlies. 

No matter how odd it is she will fit herself into it for Jay. 

That's the Subtle Message i conveyed in that Scene. 

All Jay need to do is take all clues and ACT.  
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RE: A Husband and Wife’s Playful Texts Turn Into a Complicated Affair - by heygiwriter - 11-06-2026, 07:12 PM



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