Adultery A Husband and Wife’s Playful Texts Turn Into a Complicated Affair

[heygiwriter]

VERY, very, very unique story! 

Wow.


I could literally feel the emotional heat surrounding Nikitha. Two men, and both of them seem genuinely sincere towards her. I completely understand why you mentioned a complicated affair in title.

I have a feeling the audience will be split on who Nikitha should end up with. What makes it so interesting is that neither man has the upper hand. The honesty, openness, and clarity that Nikitha brings to every situation make it impossible to pick a side easily.

She is truly an angel, just like the avatar character you wrote for Game, HeyGI. Right now, she is my second-favorite character from your stories after Mirna. Though I have to admit, if her journey continues like this, she might even overtake Mirna for me.

The lift scene was the best part. Nothing explicit, nothing dramatic—just two men caring for the same woman while she stands caught between them. A small sign of protectiveness and without asking both hands arrived. It was beautifully captured and felt incredibly real.

Loving it so far. Please keep writing. I find myself refreshing every now and then just to see if there's an update. I'm completely addicted to this story!

Thanks a lot :)