10-06-2026, 11:08 AM
The update seems to be erotic and very much interesting
I feel that u have described every bit on a emotional note and the desire concepts,the same way request u to to bring more sex episodes and intense one ,this was missed looked like the sex sessions was missed in the story and looked short
Make it erotic sex session , according to me the u paced up a bit once simran was inside the bathroom this could have done in a slow pace could have been better
Just a suggestion
Hope u got my point as a reader
Thank u for a great update
I feel that u have described every bit on a emotional note and the desire concepts,the same way request u to to bring more sex episodes and intense one ,this was missed looked like the sex sessions was missed in the story and looked short
Make it erotic sex session , according to me the u paced up a bit once simran was inside the bathroom this could have done in a slow pace could have been better
Just a suggestion
Hope u got my point as a reader
Thank u for a great update


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