[heygiwriter]

Hi buddy,

On an emotional level, this is your best chapter so far. 

The way you conveyed the emotions was raw and unapologetic.

Both characters felt real, especially with all their contradictions because apparently humans can’t make life difficult enough without confusing themselves too.


The most striking theme was the double standards. You nailed them perfectly. The past and present collide beautifully to create the mess these characters call a mindset, and somehow it all makes sense. 

You’ve set the stage for an absolute mindfuck of a story, and I can already see readers questioning their sanity right alongside the characters.

Kudos. 

It takes skill to make readers empathize with people and judge them at the exact same time.

Thank you