Adultery A Husband and Wife’s Playful Texts Turn Into a Complicated Affair
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I do not know what is Author Heygi's plan. I think this story should be a short story. If author going to stretch longer then he must be include many sex encounter between Tharun and Nikita which make Nikita a complete filthy whore like Sneha. Readers will get board to witness too many sex encounter between Tharun and Nikita like Ghoutam and Sneha. Also destroy the story. Tharun and Nikita's sexual encounter should be not more then 3-4 times. During this time Jay must realizes that he loves Nikita more then anything and express his feelings to Nikita which makes Nikita also realizes her deep love for Jay. Then both together will stop Tharun and ended this fling. After that they will paid off their home loan. Nikita will quit from job and planning for their baby. BTW the story building is too good so far. But it is necessary for the story to acknowledge the deep love between Jay and Nikita. Upcoming situation must create enough pressure on Jay to admit that he loves Nikita and he do not want to see her with anyone sexually involved. This must makes Nikita crawl back to her husband and ended the fling. Lets see how will author narrates the story.
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RE: A Husband and Wife’s Playful Texts Turn Into a Complicated Affair - by amzad2004 - 09-06-2026, 03:49 AM



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