[heygiwriter]

Bro, you are an exceptional writer. Your female characters are always so special. Somehow, we instantly connect with them, even before we fully understand why. There’s so much depth in the way you write them.

When I first started reading, I genuinely couldn’t tell who the main character was. But once the suspense ended, I got it. Now I can clearly see that you’re building a masterpiece.

One thing that surprised me is that, unlike your previous stories where sex/intimacy usually comes much later after a long buildup, it appeared relatively early here. That makes me even more curious about what you have planned? may be saving best for Nikitha and Tharun. Maybe you're saving the best moments for him. Whatever the case, I'm completely hooked.

This is fantastic, brother. Keep rocking!

Thanks a lot :)

Not suspense, but i tried non linear, but fear of reader would get confused so changed it to small suspense.