07-06-2026, 06:18 AM
(03-06-2026, 08:49 PM)Raju@Vijay Wrote:asusual one of the rocking writing update with mixing of anu, aradhana, likitha emotions...but i feel its like artificial one...not natural flow...they eat marans ayurvedic suranam but its like effectless in their sleep cannot trust that...he use black magic to show the visual purely not able to think its natural mix in the story..
something missing in the backdrop of last portion...its like forced one...
also missing priyanka emotions and thoughts...bit disappointed may be due to long dragging about their sexual party in same place too long...
narration so tiring to read with same excitement...purely i feel distracted on priyankas part...
while that asuran action using kalingan body...lot of places not feel like old update kind of feeling...mostly feels like forced fun between them...
one think sure he waits more than 1000 years not he had his time to have his meal but i feel overdose due to slow motion between thriller updates...
but bit bored thats why i said try to end this soon with big update otherwise cannot feel like a meal
Thanks nanba,your points i will keep in my mind..


asusual one of the rocking writing update with mixing of anu, aradhana, likitha emotions...but i feel its like artificial one...not natural flow...they eat marans ayurvedic suranam but its like effectless in their sleep cannot trust that...he use black magic to show the visual purely not able to think its natural mix in the story..
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