Adultery Husband's Controlled Fantasy, Wife's Dilemma - Part I & II

[heygiwriter]

Sure, sometimes time apart from the story would give you fresh ideas, they way you have written this story and left it at the wedding of Gautham points to a part 2 that cannot be small version, the revenge arc needs lot of chapters by the Gautham gets emotionally destroyed and realizes his mistakes so its not easy with out the rough plot to put it into words so take time off of this story if needed but request you to come back and finish it. 

~RCF

For sure i wanted to restart it.. Just wanted sometime to rewrite fresh and leave out the hangovers from character and few predictability. What i wrote now has no arc development. instead it felt like stuck in a loop.