02-06-2026, 07:29 PM
Conceptual depth of this story is on different dimension, you could call it a crash course on so many topics from physics to philosophy ..lol. Quality of writing is rich and top notch but hate to say it's word heavy i.e. for every single word a character utters there is a two line thought process explanation **, it was bit much! I was constantly looking for the quotes " " just to get on with the flow and see where the story is heading. I regret to say I did not read fully word-to-word for the reason above but was skimming to catch up with the plot. Such high quality writing is unusual for this forum, with bit of plot depth and amendments it could absolutely become publishing worthy as a crime thriller. Thank you for all your time invested in this, seriously this is a gem hiding in xossipy and hope you would come back and finish this story.


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