02-06-2026, 06:37 PM
Awesome story and narration. 
Both chapters were fantastic but second chapter was still missing some spark. Just felt like repeat of chapter 1 in slightly new packaging.
But still great. Waiting for next chapter. Try to add some kink and more liberation of Shazia rather than apologetic housewife.
Both chapters were fantastic but second chapter was still missing some spark. Just felt like repeat of chapter 1 in slightly new packaging.
But still great. Waiting for next chapter. Try to add some kink and more liberation of Shazia rather than apologetic housewife.
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