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01-01-2019, 11:02 PM

Good to have someone start this story again.
The way you're trying to put it together with a mix of your narrative was a bit confusing at the start, A party and a character Jignesh are not well touched or explained.
Hope you find sometime to do it better.
P.S.
These are just my thoughts but they're not intended to offend or discourage you or your efforts.

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Swati's life with Paralysed Husband - cool.smart.dude - by Darksam - 31-12-2018, 10:45 PM

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