31-05-2026, 01:32 PM
(19-05-2026, 09:46 PM)Johnnythedevil Wrote: This story could have completed as a short story. But, you seemed to have dragged it long and dropped incomplete finally.
I understand ur sentiment but this is the most cliched story in Indian erotica space u will ever see
- Innocent and stupid housewife - Check
- wimpy husband who is weak in sex - Check
- dominant Boss or local goon - Check
- She resists initially - Check
- Husband somehow watching the sex - Check
I didnt forsee the personal issues I had....also finishing in next 2 chapters wont make sense...Either another person take it up or let it be abandoned


![[+]](https://xossipy.com/themes/sharepoint/collapse_collapsed.png)