Adultery His wife, Her secrets: Rain,Whiskey and Temptation (CH:55 HOT)
Author, if you are trying to hide some pieces to reveal later point of time then you are not doing a smooth transition from chapter to chapter. In-coherency in writing chapters like these create confusion and leave everything for imagination to readers. Lokesh and Laila were in a parking garage earlier being intimate and continuation of that would make more sense than talk about Shruthi coming home as you could have ended the chapter in office after the sex and picked the next chapter from parking garage.

Instead we see Shruthi comes home and finds her husband on business tour? wtf

~RCF
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RE: His wife, Her secrets: Rain,Whiskey and Temptation (CH:55 HOT) - by RCF - 28-05-2026, 09:04 PM



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