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Hi Krish Bro, first of all this is my Novel of any type that I read. I finished in 4 days lol and I never read anything I more of a visual person. At first I started part 1 and part 2 and thought part 3 will be short but once I found so many chapters Inwas looking for quick summary but It got hooked me and invested in the Story.

Its pretty good there are few times I feel there is so Much unnecessary dialogs but overall good.

I will honest at last 4 to 5 end chapters especially when Krish hears Meera with Desai I was emotional. I never thought I would be emotional for a porn novel(no offense) But its worth it.

With that being said few things to share
1- Pacing is good but can be better
2- I like the ending except the part she had got pregnant in a threesome and not after their reunion or something like that and I wanted Krish to win at the end and I think Meera will come back to Krish regardless of pregnancy for sure either Krish go there meet her or Meera tried to reach Cause I felt the Love Meera has for Krish and Him to her

I saw your comment somewhere that there will be no 4th part or epilogue but a small special would be great like an update on everyone and with happy ending for Krish and some Talking between Meera and Krish and satisfying all readers if possible. For below

Few open ended Questions on their relationship

1- Will Krish talk to Meera about His first baby from Nikita
2- Will Krish talk to Meera about Sheetal's pregnancy proposal
3- Will we the readers or Krish ever get full details of Meera and Desai especially Anal scnes full description like other
4- Will Krish get full details with Jay ?
5- Will Krish and Meera completely honest cause I like when they are. Krish was honest sometimes but inside he thinks too much but he will be Honest. We never know Meera side as we cannot see from all angles but atleast an acknowledgement from Krish and Meera indicating She was honest.