25-05-2026, 09:37 PM
I read your story. It has a very good narration and an excellent story plot. The images are also very good.
Just one small request — if possible, please post the images directly instead of sharing them as links. If the images are visible within the story, it will be much better and more enjoyable to view the images while reading the story.
Just one small request — if possible, please post the images directly instead of sharing them as links. If the images are visible within the story, it will be much better and more enjoyable to view the images while reading the story.


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