Adultery Husband's Controlled Fantasy, Wife's Dilemma - Part I & II
Heygi, I have a suggestion.

I think Suresh and Aditya were close and seems there is strong friendship. It was narrated that they were hanging out, having drinks and have personal talks.
Instead of narration these could have been conversation how they open up. It would show their friendship. You could have even written a chapter on this.
My main point is conversation connects more than narration.
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RE: Husband's Controlled Fantasy Gone Wrong: Wife's Dilemma, Neighbor's Gain I & II - by suryaspk - 24-05-2026, 07:53 AM



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