Adultery Husband's Controlled Fantasy, Wife's Dilemma - Part I & II

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First of All , Congratulations ! First Part was a bang .

Because the Part II is not started yet , You might already have or not conceptualized the ending , but PLEASE , dont give your usual ENDINGS , where at First everyone goes to war and then in the end somehow all of them end up with happy endings . Singing , dancing and banging each other .

I know in the end GOWTHAM will realize his mistake , learn his lesson , and Sneha will resume her relation with him , Suresh will cooperate at this time . All the things left behind , Somehow , GOWTHAM and SURESH will team up against the Aditya ? I think Aditya will be a big villain here .

But with so many new character , The story has expanded into new dimensions . It is very hard to predict anything what is going to happen next .


I LOVE MIRNA   . To be honest I was not very thrilled at first , but last update made me little excited for her character , because We have SURESH here . 

I hope MIRNA get to know SURESH here , Both the character are ideal for each other . I just wish , Suresh is a kind Man , Exactly the Man Mirna deserves . Even if you dont have any such plans , At least Let the characters interact with each other for once . MIRNA and SURESH both have that decency and Innocence which none of the other characters have . They both are sensual character , both are fiercely loyal partners . I just wanna see Them interacting with each other about their life .     

Also just a suggestion :- DONT MAKE GOWTHAM ANOTHER BHARATH HERE . 
Just my observation , You get too obsessed with one character and give them thickest plot armor . Detach from the character . ( I might be wrong but that is what I observed , IGNORE IT if that is not the case )

But Again , This is your Story , You are the Captain of the SHIP . We are here for the Journey .

SO WE ARE EAGERLY WAITING FOR THE FIRST CHAPTER of PART II