23-05-2026, 10:56 PM
(23-05-2026, 04:33 AM)naree Wrote: Story ke maang ke anusar likh raha hu aur jab imotional koi character ayega tabhi us par likhunga aise bich story me kaise ad kar du.. story thodi lumbi hai is liye jyada sex ka plot aa raha hai.. agar my short me likhne lagunga to aap logo ka interest khatam ho sakta hai is liye jaisa chal raha hai chalne de kyuki yeh story 70% par aa chuki hai. End aane wala hai bas kuch episode aur.. mera dawa hai aplog ko yeh stroy padh ke acha lagega.
Please let the story continue as it is. Don't make it short. Excellent writing skills you have.


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