Adultery Husband's Controlled Fantasy, Wife's Dilemma - Part I & II

[RCF]

Heygi, this feels unnecessary at this point. It’s better to leave her arc behind and focus on the other characters. For me, Sneha’s part in the story already feels done and dusted. 

Bringing the Sneha–Suresh arc back into the main plot now could lead to a severe backlash from readers. Of course, the final decision is yours, but that’s honestly how I see it.

A simple closure would work much better. Later in the story, you could just add a couple of lines mentioning that Sneha is living her life happily with Suresh and Ramya. 

That alone would be enough to conclude her journey respectfully without dragging the narrative back again.

Generally, I don’t like giving direct story ideas to authors because I hate putting words into an author’s mouth or influencing their creative direction. 

I prefer observing quietly and letting the writer tell the story they want to tell. But after following the discussions and thinking about it for a day, this is the conclusion I arrived at.

The story has many other characters and unresolved dynamics that deserve more focus now, and revisiting the same emotional loop again may only make the plot feel repetitive instead of impactful.

I wouldn't go that far, Story needs to revolve around the couple else its meaningless. What you said was right,we could have skipped some chapters because Suresh was earlier trying not to push Gautham and make him a desperate man, he was trying to slow down things so there won't be enmity and they can amicably part ways. I at that point understood the intention and in that process, new characters were introduced and each might have a role even if its not in part 1 maybe part 2 but now reflecting back on all those chapters, Only thing achieved is making Sneha brainless and degrade further to show that sex is her weakness. Gautham ended up becoming enemy anyways, if that was the intention, there could have been a nasty fight one of the times. Esp when Sneha asked Suresh that she will stop going to Gautham, Suresh said no and continue...there at that point story could have been written differently. 

But still I feel that story is going in right direction, Gautham seems will definitely end up humiliating Sneha and Suresh. He will break them apart by end of part 1, Its inevitable. Part 2 is there for them to find a way to come back together I guess. 

~RCF