Adultery Husband's Controlled Fantasy, Wife's Dilemma - Part I & II

[Hornytamilan23]

Heygi, this feels unnecessary at this point. It’s better to leave her arc behind and focus on the other characters. For me, Sneha’s part in the story already feels done and dusted. 

Bringing the Sneha–Suresh arc back into the main plot now could lead to a severe backlash from readers. Of course, the final decision is yours, but that’s honestly how I see it.

A simple closure would work much better. Later in the story, you could just add a couple of lines mentioning that Sneha is living her life happily with Suresh and Ramya. 

That alone would be enough to conclude her journey respectfully without dragging the narrative back again.

Generally, I don’t like giving direct story ideas to authors because I hate putting words into an author’s mouth or influencing their creative direction. 

I prefer observing quietly and letting the writer tell the story they want to tell. But after following the discussions and thinking about it for a day, this is the conclusion I arrived at.

The story has many other characters and unresolved dynamics that deserve more focus now, and revisiting the same emotional loop again may only make the plot feel repetitive instead of impactful.