Adultery Husband's Controlled Fantasy, Wife's Dilemma - Part I & II

[Hornytamilan23]

To elevate Suresh, Author needs to degrade Sneha more and more...Is there any other choice? yes there is but won't take it. Why would she even allow to penetration, her falling for his sweet talk after calling her slut and after being hurt so much is unbelievable. Poor writing here no doubt, just taking shortcuts wherever it is needed. 

I was just saying the emotional layers need to be written in this story well and in his writing in general. I feel that is lacking immensely in lot of episodes. If such nuances are corrected, his stories will become epic. I know its not a career and just fun but I genuinely want author to see if there can be improvement. 

~RCF

RCF, this is what was supposed to happen, but not now. This should have happened 50 chapters earlier — cut off Sneha, move on with Gowtham and Varsha, and take the story in a different direction. That might have worked, but now it’s too late.

He dragged it unnecessarily, kept recycling the same plot, started multiple arcs, and then dropped them halfway.

Still, till around 70–80 chapters, it was top-notch. After that, the story started going downhill.

If this was always supposed to happen, it should’ve happened the moment he shoved his dick into Sneha’s mouth in front of Suresh on the sofa. Now it just feels too late.