Adultery Husband's Controlled Fantasy, Wife's Dilemma - Part I & II

[RCF]

Not sure if it is typo at end of the chapter, Siresh want to teach a lesson to Suresh?

Apart from that poor Sneha... Trusting Goutham again? Allowed to take off nighty...

To elevate Suresh, Author needs to degrade Sneha more and more...Is there any other choice? yes there is but won't take it. Why would she even allow to penetration, her falling for his sweet talk after calling her slut and after being hurt so much is unbelievable. Poor writing here no doubt, just taking shortcuts wherever it is needed. 

I was just saying the emotional layers need to be written in this story well and in his writing in general. I feel that is lacking immensely in lot of episodes. If such nuances are corrected, his stories will become epic. I know its not a career and just fun but I genuinely want author to see if there can be improvement. 

~RCF