22-05-2026, 09:14 PM
(22-05-2026, 08:51 PM)heygiwriter Wrote: Will take some time to sketch Part 2.
Need some honest feedback on Part 1. Which is ending in few more chapters
Suresh is too Naive, determined to loose everytime and occasionally lfted up to prolong continuity, Sneha is too slutty and hypocritical... Goutham is too selfish and aditya and hanika came laterback it could have more grisping if he was initally engaged with them and if hanika episode added instaed of divorce episode... Trust me story would be more highly articulated...
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