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See What I meant is you set the bar high with the narration in this story and they way you took it thru the various stages... The ending could have been better like the rest of the story...even if you left it open ended making way for your next story... This was quite an abrupt ending... This is all I meant to say...

show me one positive comment from you appreciating the story, now you say so many things after the story is done.

writers need encouragement from readers. not just read and go type. in general this is an issue in this forum, more so in English section. if there are 100k views, i can count max 100 likes for the 29 episodes i wrote. so why should anyone spend so much time to write long stories here ?

anyway, i didn't compromise on the climax as its exactly what i had on mind, its just that i speeded up the ending, there was scope for another 10 episodes

so with that in mind, dont expect me to finish the stories as they were started. its a journey together, not one way battle

this is meant for all readers, not just you, even though you give bad comments, i can see Likes from you

if i have put similar effort to write this story in Telugu, it would have got more appreciation. For some reason, in English section people like only cuckold, wife and husband adultery and inter faith stories. i dont see many full family stories, they never like emotional, sentimental stories, they like sexual, erotic narration. just my observation