Adultery Cheating Wives - Deceiving Husbands - Cunning Watchman (Completed)

[sexypreeti]

I am yet to see any positive comment from you. There is lot of negativity and with Luke warm response from readers , it's hard to write stories here.

See What I meant is you set the bar high with the narration in this story and they way you took it thru the various stages... The ending could have been better like the rest of the story...even if you left it open ended making way for your next story... This was quite an abrupt ending... This is all I meant to say...