20-05-2026, 07:40 PM
(20-05-2026, 07:30 PM)Hornytamilan23 Wrote: Good one... you have a taste for sure
I did not like one sentence from Author in the story. I am sure he has his reasons but I am always used to reading story where main lead female character is always the most beautiful among others, When stories like these where they introduce Storyverse where other leads from different stories are introduced then many women in the story are equally beautiful but each individual has their own essence and beauty.
For example, I would imagine Sneha to be more sensual, voluptuous, hourglass figure and a face that peaks with maturity and serene appeal while Varsha lean, petite like a model and a face that shows purity and beauty that comes with young age. In their own way, both are extremely beautiful and I prefer that way....but Author i don't know why made Jiva say, before Varsha, Sneha is nothing even though she is good.
I did not like that comparison. It brings down the value of Sneha in eyes of Gautham who has been behind Sneha all the story when he can get a better hot model as Varsha as his partner. If possible would request Author to go back and edit that section.
~RCF


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