20-05-2026, 11:36 AM
Hi Mr Writer,
Your story is good. I am patient and will wait for your return. Take your time. Don't be in a hurry. You too deserve some rest. I know other people will insult me for this, but I don't care. You take your break and enjoy.
I, myself don't like many things about this story like office arc (in starting because it was slow). I didn't shy about mentioning it in comment, but at the same time I also mentioned that I will support you and will be patient. Now when this office arc is showing progress like Suresh's recent promotion.
I don't know about these other characters from past stories, so no comments.
I also don't like this behaviour of Suresh but when you explained that in 1 full update (open conversation between them) I started supporting them. But still I also complained about Suresh not taking any lead in this regard.
But at the same time I also supported sex between Sneha and Gautam. Because at the end of the day, this is a FICTIONAL & ADULTERY STORY. So it is basic comman sense that either one of the couple (Sneha in this story) will be having sexual relationship outside her marriage. And the thing I like is them teasing each other after her sex with Gautam.
The reason why Gautam is so bad in this story is because author want to continue this story. He don't want to end it in next 10 updates. If he did that, then that will be truly disappointing. I will miss the pleasure of seeing some Revenge arc. Because revenge is the dish better served cold.
I mean the more dark side he shows now, the more satisfying the revenge will be. Like if Gautham has a sudden change of heart and he started supporting Sneha and stop all these backstabbing moves then revenge will be boring.
He is getting attention from Sneha and Suresh, but also think that the couple is ok with him having sex with Sneha for some time. They are slowing down like for past week Gautam is only listening Sneha's moaning her husband's name. He is just listening and (maybe masterbating) but definitely no sex. Otherwise author would have mentioned.
I don't like the introductory remarks about Aaditya, and I mentioned it 2 - 3 time. And I am glad that author stopped mentioning those things. Appreciate it bro. It shows that you were reading my comments and you liked it. Now I also like how Suresh and Aaditya are working together and making an empire where both of them will win and grow together. I like this subtle change between there relationship like Suresh was used to be at receiving end (like always mind his next words carefully, not scared but somehow his heart beat used to rise etc) and Aaditya being more dominant in every move (like that Predator waiting for hunt, always dark), but now both are sharing breakfast. I also like the think that author didn't make them partners after just 1 blockbuster idea. This will make story more realistic.
This new female character. I think she is someone who has suffered greatly for her love (her husband). Don't know why she was crying. She is also indirectly helping Versha. Like she is seeing herself in her. Now the most interesting thing to see will be how she will find about true nature of Gautam, how she will save Versha (I think she like her), how she will meet Suresh and then Sneha and how she will help Suresh in revenge.
Because at this point Suresh is not in mood of revenge. He is just happy with his wife, his family. So how will he change his mind and become the beast that will hunt Gautam and will let him know what does the word CONSEQUENCES even means.( Most probably Gautam will blackmail them with Sneha's nude pic and video).
So I am eagerly waiting for next updates, but buddy take your time. If you think you need a break, then go ahead. I will support you. But I will continue to mention the things I don't like and don't understand.
Waiting for next update......
Your story is good. I am patient and will wait for your return. Take your time. Don't be in a hurry. You too deserve some rest. I know other people will insult me for this, but I don't care. You take your break and enjoy.
I, myself don't like many things about this story like office arc (in starting because it was slow). I didn't shy about mentioning it in comment, but at the same time I also mentioned that I will support you and will be patient. Now when this office arc is showing progress like Suresh's recent promotion.
I don't know about these other characters from past stories, so no comments.
I also don't like this behaviour of Suresh but when you explained that in 1 full update (open conversation between them) I started supporting them. But still I also complained about Suresh not taking any lead in this regard.
But at the same time I also supported sex between Sneha and Gautam. Because at the end of the day, this is a FICTIONAL & ADULTERY STORY. So it is basic comman sense that either one of the couple (Sneha in this story) will be having sexual relationship outside her marriage. And the thing I like is them teasing each other after her sex with Gautam.
The reason why Gautam is so bad in this story is because author want to continue this story. He don't want to end it in next 10 updates. If he did that, then that will be truly disappointing. I will miss the pleasure of seeing some Revenge arc. Because revenge is the dish better served cold.
I mean the more dark side he shows now, the more satisfying the revenge will be. Like if Gautham has a sudden change of heart and he started supporting Sneha and stop all these backstabbing moves then revenge will be boring.
He is getting attention from Sneha and Suresh, but also think that the couple is ok with him having sex with Sneha for some time. They are slowing down like for past week Gautam is only listening Sneha's moaning her husband's name. He is just listening and (maybe masterbating) but definitely no sex. Otherwise author would have mentioned.
I don't like the introductory remarks about Aaditya, and I mentioned it 2 - 3 time. And I am glad that author stopped mentioning those things. Appreciate it bro. It shows that you were reading my comments and you liked it. Now I also like how Suresh and Aaditya are working together and making an empire where both of them will win and grow together. I like this subtle change between there relationship like Suresh was used to be at receiving end (like always mind his next words carefully, not scared but somehow his heart beat used to rise etc) and Aaditya being more dominant in every move (like that Predator waiting for hunt, always dark), but now both are sharing breakfast. I also like the think that author didn't make them partners after just 1 blockbuster idea. This will make story more realistic.
This new female character. I think she is someone who has suffered greatly for her love (her husband). Don't know why she was crying. She is also indirectly helping Versha. Like she is seeing herself in her. Now the most interesting thing to see will be how she will find about true nature of Gautam, how she will save Versha (I think she like her), how she will meet Suresh and then Sneha and how she will help Suresh in revenge.
Because at this point Suresh is not in mood of revenge. He is just happy with his wife, his family. So how will he change his mind and become the beast that will hunt Gautam and will let him know what does the word CONSEQUENCES even means.( Most probably Gautam will blackmail them with Sneha's nude pic and video).
So I am eagerly waiting for next updates, but buddy take your time. If you think you need a break, then go ahead. I will support you. But I will continue to mention the things I don't like and don't understand.
Waiting for next update......
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